💬
Chương 3
Paraphrase Master Bank
11 nhóm cụm từ — chia core (cho mọi process), structural (theo subtype), specialized (vocab chuyên ngành).
📌 Core (chung mọi process)
🔢 1. Sequencing connectors
Kết nối stages — bắt buộc cho mọi process. Mỗi body cần ≥ 3 connectors.
Sequencing All 5
A2first · then · next · after that · finally
B1firstly · subsequently · following this · in the next stage · finally
B2at the outset · subsequently · thereafter · in the ensuing stage · ultimately
C1at the commencement · in the antecedent stage · in the subsequent phase · in the culminating stage
🔄 2. Passive structures
Bắt buộc ~80% câu dùng passive — process focus vào hoạt động, không phải người làm.
Passive voice patterns All 5
A2is heated · is mixed · is moved · is made
B1is then heated · is subsequently mixed · is transported · is produced
B2is subjected to · is treated with · is processed through · is converted into
C1undergoes treatment · is subjected to processing · is rendered into · is transformed by
🚪 3. Phase openers
Mở đầu body paragraph với câu giới thiệu phase.
Phase introduction All 5
A2The first part is… · The next part is…
B1The process begins with… · The next stage involves…
B2The preliminary phase commences with… · The intermediate stage entails…
C1The inaugural phase is characterised by… · The intervening stage encompasses…
🔗 4. Participial linking
Cụm phân từ liên kết câu — gọn hơn câu phụ thuộc.
Participial phrases All 5
A2After heating… · Once mixed…
B1Having been heated… · Once mixed…
B2Having undergone heating… · Upon being mixed… · Following condensation…
C1Having been subjected to heat… · Upon completion of mixing…
🏗️ Structural (theo subtype)
↻ 5. Cyclic language
Cho process khép kín (PP3, PP4) — diễn đạt vòng lặp.
Cycle phrases PP3, PP4
B1the cycle repeats · the process begins again · returns to the start
B2the cycle is renewed · the process is perpetuated · the sequence recommences
C1the cycle is self-sustaining · the process perpetuates indefinitely · the sequence completes a full revolution
🌳 6. Branching language
Cho process có rẽ nhánh (PP5) — diễn đạt phân tách paths.
Branching phrases PP5
B1the process splits · two paths emerge · one route is… while the other…
B2the process diverges · two alternative pathways · one stream proceeds to… whereas the other…
C1the process bifurcates · the material follows divergent pathways · one trajectory leads to… while an alternative leads to…
🆕 New Groups (đã inject)
🏷️ 7. Stage descriptors
Tên gọi các stages — initial / intermediate / final.
Stage names All 5
A2the first step · the next step · the last step
B1the initial stage · the middle stage · the final stage
B2the preliminary stage · the intermediate stage · the concluding stage
C1the inaugural stage · the intervening phases · the culminating stage
⚡ 8. Cause / Effect
Diễn đạt quan hệ nguyên nhân-kết quả giữa stages.
Cause & effect All 5
A2this makes · because of this · so
B1this causes · as a result · leading to
B2resulting in · thereby producing · which in turn causes
C1giving rise to · engendering · thus precipitating
🎯 9. Purpose clauses
Mục đích của mỗi stage (in order to, so as to).
Purpose phrases All 5
A2to do X · for X
B1in order to [verb] · so as to [verb] · for [purpose]
B2with the aim of [verb-ing] · for the purpose of [verb-ing]
C1with a view to [verb-ing] · with the intention of [verb-ing]
🔬 Specialized vocabulary
🏭 10. Manufacturing & Recycling vocab
Vocab kỹ thuật cho PP1 (manufacturing) và PP5 (recycling).
Manufacturing PP1
A2raw materials · machine · crushed · mixed · heated
B1raw materials · machinery · crushing machine · mixing chamber · heated up · powder
B2raw materials are crushed · the mixing chamber · subjected to extreme heat · the rotating kiln · fine powder · by-products
C1raw materials undergo crushing · the kiln subjects the mixture to extreme temperatures · yields fine clinker
Recycling loop PP5
A2collect · sort · clean · melt · make new things
B1collected · sorted by type · cleaned · shredded · melted down · reused
B2collected from households · sorted according to type · shredded into flakes · melted at high temperatures · pelletised · reprocessed
C1the waste is amassed at collection points · categorised by polymer type · granulated and rendered into pellets · completing a closed-loop cycle
🌿 11. Natural process vocab
Vocab tự nhiên cho PP2 (water), PP3 (biology), PP4 (water cycle).
Water-specific PP2
debris · particles · sediments · bacteria · contaminants · impurities · screening · filtration · sedimentation · chlorination · disinfection
Biology-specific PP3
larva · caterpillar · chrysalis · pupa · cocoon · metamorphosis · emerge · hatch · transform · adult stage
Water cycle PP4
evaporation · condensation · precipitation · runoff · infiltration · transpiration · atmospheric · vapour · clouds form · returns to earth
⚠️
Chương 4
Common Errors & Upgrades
8 lỗi đặc trưng Process — đa số liên quan đến voice + tense + missing connectors.
Lỗi 1 · Active voice
Dùng câu chủ động khi nên dùng passive
Process focus vào hoạt động, không người làm. ~80% câu phải là passive.
Workers crush the raw materials. The machine heats the kiln.
The raw materials are crushed. The kiln is heated to extreme temperatures.
Lỗi 2 · Wrong tense
Dùng past tense hoặc present continuous cho process timeless
Process diagram = simple present (timeless mô tả). KHÔNG dùng past hoặc continuous trừ khi đề bài rõ.
The water was heated and then it was being cooled.
The water is heated and then cooled.
Lỗi 3 · Missing connectors
Không có sequence connectors giữa stages
Mỗi stage chuyển tiếp cần connector. Mỗi body ≥ 3 connectors.
The materials are crushed. The materials are mixed. The materials are heated.
First, the materials are crushed. Then, they are mixed in a chamber. Subsequently, the mixture is heated in the kiln.
Lỗi 4 · No grouping
Liệt kê tất cả stages trong 1 body
Phải group thành 2-3 phases. Body 1 = phase 1 (+2), Body 2 = phase 2 (or 3) + cycle/branch.
Body 1: Stage 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 all in one paragraph.
Body 1 (Preparation): Crushing + mixing. Body 2 (Processing): Heating + grinding + packaging.
Lỗi 5 · Missing overview
Bỏ overview hoặc overview chỉ là 1 câu ngắn
Overview phải nêu: process bao nhiêu stages + có cyclic/branching không + topic chung.
Overall, this is a process about cement.
Overall, the process comprises seven distinct stages, beginning with raw material extraction and culminating in cement packaging, with no cyclical or branching elements.
Lỗi 6 · Cyclic process: missing cycle close
Cyclic process (PP3, PP4) không nhắc cycle khép kín
Body 2 hoặc cuối body cần câu nhắc: "the cycle repeats" / "begins again".
After the butterfly emerges, the process ends.
After the butterfly emerges, it eventually lays eggs of its own, thereby completing the cycle and beginning the process anew.
Lỗi 7 · Branching: chỉ tả 1 path
Branching process (PP5) chỉ mô tả 1 trong 2 paths
After shredding, the plastic is melted to make new products.
After shredding, the plastic follows two alternative paths: one stream is melted and pelletised to form new products, while the other is incinerated to generate energy.
Lỗi 8 · Generic vocab
Dùng "thing" / "stuff" / "do this" thay vì technical vocab
The raw thing is put in a machine and stuff happens.
The raw materials are placed into the crusher, where they undergo grinding to form a fine powder.